I can't tell if its both or one of joy or agony.
A mass of thoughts spinning through my mind,
Thoughts to sort out, whether or not there's time.
One minute ago I felt so close to you,
Now i cant help but wonder, where are you?
I know you did not distance yourself from me,
And if it's not you, it can only be me.
I'm sorry for the times I've wronged you.
Aware or unaware of what I do.
Oh how I've broken your heart,
When i only obey in part.
This seperation just doesn't feel right,
So cold, so dark, the lack of light.
That's what it feels like when you're absent,
My life is miserable when you're distant.
Oh the comfort of your assurance,
Oh the joy of your acceptance.
That you look beyond my faults,
Past my failures of all sorts.
My response is to love you more,
With a love untamed, one that is raw.
Draw me close to you,
Bring me back to you.
-Jeremy-
5 comments:
wah so romantic ah?
*ticks of 6th item on to-do list*
wow, thats really beautiful. its true. i never knew behind that malaysian accent was such mad english skillz.
i guess we've all been through a stage of feeling confused, distant and alone. but the point of this comment is to say that at least you've come through it and overcome such times!! this is how we overcome ! woot wooot .
i especially like this part,
My response is to love you more,
With a love untamed, one that is raw.
i hope you are indeedy feeling better, because you've always been so encouraging to me, inspiring even. so no more emo-like hair = no more emo-like jem . SMILE ! and ill seeya tomorow . =D
henry: well i'm still learning...from you Mr.Emo
sarah: yes, i feel better indeed. thanks for your prayers and encouragement. cya later today.
haha..sure anot? lol..my english so limited.
hey, can some one put some music nas make a tune, it will become a nice song by J9
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